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•  Transition between eating shots at dinner table
  I will add this because it is not realistic at the moment
  
• Elevator music emd soooner and go back to scary music.
  Yes, I agree to this and it brings the audience back to the world of the chef
  
• Lengthen shot looking out of window
  Yes then I will begin news report.
• Credits
  The dont follow classic conventions so I ned to move them
• SFX of car crashing
  It will add to the atmosphere I am trying to create.
  
•  Good Flicker effect
  I will keep the flicker because it adds the effect of lost footage